He is many things but above all others he is human.
Is that vague enough for you world!!! Ambiguity is the name of the muther-F*N game and the one that makes the least sense wins.
But on a more serious note. I decided to add some gory details from his past into book 1's 4th rewrite... if you do the math that is like a rewrite every 1.75 years... So really this is a good thing. I'm obviously a slow learner and I will never give up on giving this world, these characters a proper tribute!
Major Changes:
*Hom is now Alba (gaelic word for home so I felt it fit better with the worldscope.)
*Stouri Beegens is Souien which is already pretty much canon besides some flub ups on my part.
*Jennie will be seeing more combat... literally. She'll be fighting by the festival. Albeit not as seasoned as Haru/Nigel/Jin but holding her own... I'm thinking of adding some Karate Kid moments for her and Haru create some tension. (okay someone can stop me if Haru/Jennie is bordering on pedophilia... it's supposed to be her first real crush and I SWEAR to YWVH I will not allow any perversions in my book that goes beyond the crush zone.)
*the introductions of Tamatsu, Tryst and Pierce may or may not happen anymore... I might have more fleshing out to do and I was thinking of either moving the monastery scene further towards the beginning to omitting it all together. That stuff is still in the air.
*Adding the COLORs is a definite but also omitting Joseph and any Zeriel portions, that stuff is WAY TOO early... but maybe not?
*Peter's back story will be added but only portions, the Rose stuff and his days with Pengelworm.
What do you mean you won't allow perversion in your book?? I think that's all mine is! HA! (Okay, not really, but it sure is fun to write!)
ReplyDeleteI just don't want anyone saying I'm writing smut that's all... because if i was I would but I don't so I'm not. The latter part of your comment mad me laugh, I have written 1 or 2 in the past and there are parts that were in this book but I am really just fearful that things I write will be taken out of context is all and it's just some needless worrying I suppose.
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